The Fiction Writer's Guide to Dialogue


Dialogue is often overlooked as a necessary and potent instrument in the novelist’s repertoire. A novel can rise or fall on the strength of its dialogue. Superb dialogue can make a superb novel. F. Scott Fitzgerald wrote, “Action is character.” George V. Higgins said, “Dialogue is character.” They were both right, because dialogue is action. It comprises much, if not all, of the clarifying drama of any novel.

“Think of dialogue in fiction as what is left when the extraneous verbiage is stripped away,” writes John Hough, Jr. He explains how dialogue can reveal a character’s nature as well as his or her defining impulses and emotions. He shows the reader ways to create tension in every conversation. Hough illustrates with examples from his own work and from that of the best modern writers of dialogue, including Cormac McCarthy, Kent Haruf, Joan Didion, Annie Proulx, Lee Smith, Elmore Leonard, George V. Higgins, William Kennedy, and Howard Frank Mosher. He cites early twentieth-century writers who refined and advanced dialogue as an art form: Ernest Hemingway to Dorothy Parker. With a little help as well from Dickens and Melville.


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Little Bighorn


As a favor to the beautiful actress Mary Deschenes, Lt. Colonel George Armstrong Custer hires her eighteen-year-old son Allen Winslow as an aide for his 1876 campaign against the Sioux and Cheyenne. Traveling west against his will, Allen finds himself in the company of Addie Grace Lord, sixteen, sister of one of Custer’s regimental surgeons. The two fall in love, and it is with foreboding that Addie Grace watches Allen and her brother George ride out with Custer’s Seventh Cavalry. Weeks later in Montana, hundreds of miles to the west, the Seventh brings its quarry to bay beside a river called the Little Bighorn.


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A classic in the making: Seen the Glory re-creates the Civil War experience as vividly as the classic novel The Killer Angels. The soldiers of the storied 20th Massachusetts regiment, the sullen Southerners they march past, the hopeful freedmen and worried slaves, the terrified residents of Gettysburg, battle-hardened Confederate soldiers are all rendered with realism and historical accuracy.


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A classic love story, The Last Summer chronicles the doomed affair of a young man and an older woman running away from a life out of control.


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